Edits Done Through Chapter 20

I’ve enjoyed editing chapters 18-20. I’ve removed redundancy, added new bits, with more world building, emotion, and character development.

I wanted to share a passage from the book. I’ll try to do this in future progress updates, too.

She passed many travelers, keeping her head down. Near noon, she approached the capital of Snikm, surrounded by fifty-foot high walls composed of large sandstone blocks. Carvings of ancient battles and scenes from Ursabel’s storied past decorated them.
A massive gate was crafted from thick planks of oak, bound with ornate ironwork. Two colossal statues, each a warrior holding pilum and buckler, flanked the gate. The city had been sieged many times over the centuries, but never taken.

I’m finally under 150K edited words!

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